Writing Assignment

Today's assignment was pretty good. I found out some things that I need to work on. For instance, I need to make my email a little more longer. I didn't elaborate as much as I should have. I was thinking my paper was just about finished. But I guess I was wrong. I still need to make it a little bit longer. I didn't give enough information, because I wasn't thinking about anything else, but finishing the paper. I kind of have a better idea on what to write about. I had help from my group members, who where: Julie, Soledad, some other girl that had joined our group. I forgot her name, I think it was Isis, or Iris. I really can't remember. But anywho, they each gave me their own opinion. And they also helped me out with my grammer, and sentence structure. And Mrs. Crawford helped me out a ton. I think when I finish my assignment, it will become a good assignment. If I fail, which I doubt, I will be pretty suprised. Because I will do my best. I have a feeling Mrs. Crawford will really like my paper. I kind of have nothing else keeping me back from doing the essay write now, but I have to do this blog. It will get me started on my writing, which is good for me. I kind of want to get an "A" so I will stop doing this assignment and start doing my other assignment.